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千里同風 [05.10.2021:2330] – created aequivinius千里同風 [16.08.2026:0715] (current) – ↷ Links adapted because of a move operation 34.198.218.152
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    * That was my feeling with 高橋先生, I miss her.    * That was my feeling with 高橋先生, I miss her.
 +   * In IV 2025, I had a lesson with Chikako about this scroll:
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 +   * The above one is hers, the below one mine, after some practise with her corrections:
 +         * Rest the brush long enough on the 3<sup>rd</sup> stroke of 千 to it's clean and sharp
 +         * Make the 冂 of the 里 a bit V-shaped, and make sure the bottom line of the 二 inside it is flush with it. Also, the bottom line of the 土 can be quite thick
 +         * For the 冂 of the 同, make sure the vertical lines are thick, and the horizontal one a bit thinner. The inner 一 above the 口 can be more dot-like
 +         * Here, it's a 几 around the 風, so it's not V-shaped, but rather the opposite! Also, the last bit of that last stroke should point towards the ノ above the 虫 to give a feeling of continuity.